The Blitz by Jack F

Posted on October 9, 2019 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to The Blitz by Jack F

  1. trybs says:
    October 9, 2019 at 1:17 pm

    I like your gas mask picture. It’s really creepy and imagine what it would be like in the war!

  2. whelf says:
    October 9, 2019 at 1:20 pm

    Really good and I love the picture of the gas mask,well done.

  3. leem says:
    October 9, 2019 at 1:20 pm

    I really like the simile at the beginning but I think you can improve on the length of the poem.

  4. clarb says:
    October 9, 2019 at 1:20 pm

    I love the picture, it really associates with the poem.

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